Thursday, April 23, 2026

Hunter and Gil dialogue in progress

EXT.   OAK MOTTE - DAY

Describe.

Gil and Hunter in ATV aimed at view. The boys in treehouse, ATV nearby. 

HUNTER: How long have you been here?

GIL: My entire life.  My dad and uncle used their G-I bills to start a construction company in San Antonio. Couple years later dad bought the land, started building on his time off. We'd come up and spend the night in tents. 

HUNTER: We being whom?

GIL: Me, my sister, mom and dad, and whomever of his crew were up. Uncle did the same with land he bought near Vanderpool. 

HUNTER: World war two G-I bill.

GIL: Yessir. Dad was Army in France, his brother Danny was U-S-M-C in the Philippines. 

HUNTER: Tom was a Marine in Vietnam.

GIL: He was. Did he talk about it?

HUNTER: No. Just a reference to boot camp in San Diego.

GIL: We were there together.

HUNTER: Ruth mentioned that. And that you might be willing to talk about it.

GIL: She mentioned you might ask. We can do that. Maybe when you're back next week.

HUNTER: Thank you.

GIL: I've got pictures.

HUNTER: I'd love to see them.

GIL: Deer at your three o-clock.

A beat before it occurs to Hunter to turn to his right to see the WHITETAIL BUCK looking back at them from fifty yards away.

HUNTER: Did Tom hunt?

GIL: Got his first here, right where he is, from the tree house. His thirteenth birthday. Me, Tom and our dads. But if he ever pulled a trigger after he cam back I don't know about it. 

HUNTER: Came back from Vietnam.

GIL: Yessir. 

HUNTER: Did he ever say why?

GIL: We talked about it. I'll tell you more when you're back, if you're interested.

HUNTER: Very.

GIL: Have you ever hunted, Hunter?

HUNTER: I killed a robin with a slingshot when I was eleven. That was enough hunting for me. 


to be continued.

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